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卷面分（5分）： 书写仔细认真，单词拼写准确，大小写、标点符号运用规范，卷面干净，整齐。（根据情况教师给予卷面分1 5分）。 作文分（15分）： 第一档：（12 15分） 完全符合题目要求，完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点，准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯，允许有个别语言错误。 第二档：（8 11分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构，适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。语言基本通顺，有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（4 7分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务，未能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。 第四档：（0 3分） 未完成试题规定的任务，漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多，内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。篇二：初中生英语分类作文 初中英语作文写作技巧 一、掌握常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词： at first; at last; in the end… then / next/ after that… when / while/as soon as/not… until…at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately… in a word/in all议论文常用连接词： 表示并列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also; 表示递进的：besides; whats more; what’s worse; moreover; 表示原因的：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; for the reason that…;表示结果的：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore; 表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; in order to…; for…; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…;表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say…表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb. benefit from sth. affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put ones heart into…; be good at; be poor at; be weak in; 表达个人想法的：I think/believe…; as for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;其他： in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way; 二、记住作文万能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. 1 It takes sb. +时间+to do… Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ in doing sth. Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common…for sb. to v…It’s nice/kind of sb. to v.. It’s time for sb. to do sth. It’s a waste of time to… It’s …years/days since sb. +ved It?s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing It?s a pity that… It?s an honor to… I?m/We?re not allowed to …I?m afraid of making mistakes… There be …doing… Great changes have taken place in… sth is/are well worth v ing. It seems/seemed that…It seems impossible to v… It is said that… As the saying goes, … …and …. are different in many ways. too + adj./adv. to doThere are many differences between … and … I have made up my mind to … I am sure that… I am not sure whether/if… I would rather …. than … It doesn’t matter if… Thank you for doing sth… wish you successful/success as time goes by… looking back to the past three years,…（用现在完成时态） have trouble/difficulty in doing sth.have no time to do have experience in doing sth. follow ones advice/suggestions 三、熟悉写作步骤： 1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点； 4 复查：至少两遍——一遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；第二遍读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 初中生英语分类作文范例 第一章 记叙文 佳作一 题目：以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇词数80—100的英语短文。 要点提示： 1、 孙老师今年36岁，中等身材； 2、 她关心、热爱学生，工作认真负责； 3、 她语文课讲得生动、有趣。 My Chinese Teacher Of all the subject, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher, Ms Sun. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much. My Chinese teacher is thirty six years old and she is neither tall nor short. Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much. Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we?re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies. Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school. 佳作二 题目：请以“妈妈下岗了但坚韧、努力拼搏，通过做清洁工来实现自己的理想，做一个对社会有用的人”为题材，写一篇词数80~100的短文。 要点提示： 1、 妈妈下岗了但没有自暴自弃，想做一个对社会有用的人； 2、 通过为社区做清洁工作来实现自己的理想； 3、 得到社会的承认，对社区做出了贡献； 4、 自己的评价。 提示词语：社区community；下岗be laid off My Laid off Mother My mother was laid off from her job two years ago. At first she felt unhappy but she didn?t lose her heart. She began to look for a job everywhere but she failed. Later she decided to do the cleaning for the old or the sick in hospital in our community. She worked hard and made a contribution to our community by doing her duty. Many people thanked her for her hard and careful work. She was recognized as a model person in our community last year. Now she is getting on well with her work. She is proud of herself for being a useful person to society. So do my father and I. 第二章 描写文 佳作一 题目：学习之余，我们都有一些闲暇时间，你是如何支配这些业余时间折？是 2 看电视、做运动、听音乐、读书、郊游、做家务，还是……？ 请你以“My Free Time”为题，写一篇词数80~100的短文，描述一下自己的业余生活。 要点提示： 1、 课余喜欢做什么？为什么喜欢做？ 2、 举例说明课余时间做过的或准备做的一件有益的事。 注意：1、短文必须包括所列要点；2、文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。 范文 My Free Time I have lots of things to do in my free time. I often play basketball, listen to music, and go to the English corner after school. Among them I like going to the English corner best. When I go to the English corner, I often make many friends who have the same hobby as me. And at the same time, I can improve my English. During the coming summer vacation, I want to have a change. I?d like to do something useful. I will join a summer camp to the countryside. There we will learn something about the environment and learn how to stop the pollution. I am looking forward to that day. 佳作二 题目：以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题，用英语写一篇描写我的家乡变化的描写文，词数100~120。 The Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown lies in the mountains. It used to be poor. But now great changes have taken place in my hometown. A new high way to the big cities is through my village like a white belt. New school is being built behind the old one. Many new motorbikes and new cars are seen in the village. Another hospital has been built nearby. All the mountains are covered by green trees and grass. But a few years ago, the mountains here were bare. What great changes we have had in my hometown! Now my hometown looks like a newly born boy to grow up on its way. 佳作三 题目：请以“The Internet”为题写一篇词数100左右的描写文。 The Internet Computers are more and more popular in the world. People around the world know about computers. At the same time, people benefit from the Internet a lot. The Internet is very modern and convenient. It?s very easy to use. People can use it to do many things. And it can deal with many things well and fast. Do you need any information? Do you want to make more friends? Do you want to do shopping? You can all use the Internet. It?s really our best helper at any time. The Internet can be good enough to serve use well. But it may also get us into trouble. Some bad fellows can steal things using the Internet. They can also know our secrets. So we must learn how to protect ourselves. Never show any of your personal information on the Internet. So you can make best use of the Internet safely and happily.章 议论文 佳作一 题目：丰富多彩的课外活动可以减轻压力、充实校园生活；同学们还可以在活动中强身健体、在合作中增进友谊。但是一些学生认为参加课外活动浪费时间、分散精力；特别是活动后容易感到疲劳，从而影响学习…… 请你围绕九年级学生在复习备考期间该不该参加课外活动（after class activities）这一话题，展开思路谈谈你的感想。 注意：1、请根据所提供的信息材料和话题（不要逐句翻译），写出结构完整、语言丰富优美、表达合理、语法准确、符合逻辑、可读性强的短文；2、词数80以上；3、不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名；4、题目自拟。 More After class Activities Nowadays students work hard and they are always under a lot of stress. The health of the teenagers is also ignored. In fact, it?s good for them to have more after class activities. Colorful after class activities can rest their brains and eyes so that they can ease stress. Usually, taking more exercise will build up their bodies. Besides, they will learn to do teamwork. At the same time, students can also gain friendship in the activities. What a helpful idea to take more after class activities! Take more after class activities and you?ll get more time to study. In this way, you can make more progress in your study. 译文 佳作二 题目：假如你叫李平，参加了学校开展的“烦 恼向谁说”的调查活动，调查结果如图所示。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，内容包括：调查结果（不局限于用分数表述）、理由及自己的想法。 注意：1、语句通顺，合乎逻辑；2、词数80~100（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示词语：调查survey；信任trust Dear Editor, I am a student in Grade Three. We have made a survey — “To whom you go when in trouble”. Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble because they?re almost of the same age. They can talk and communicate with each other and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends. 3 In my opinion, when in trouble, we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help. 佳作三 题目：请你写一篇议论文，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因以及你的看法。 原因：1、家庭贫穷，他们不得不在家帮助家长赚钱养家； 2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿意让她们上学； 3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 看法：1、每个儿童都应该有受教育的机会； 2、全社会都应该重视儿童教育，这关系到国家的未来。 注意：1、不要逐词逐句翻译；2、语句应连贯通顺；3、词数100左右；4、开头已给出。 范文 Out of School Now in the country areas, there are many children are out of school. Thats a pity for school children. I think one of the reasons is their families are too poor to pay their schooling. So they have to stay at home to make money to support their families. Another reason is that many parents think it useless for the girls to learn more and they would not like them to go to school. The third reason is that some children are not interested in their lessons. So they would not like to go to school. To my mind, all the children, boys and girls, should go to school. All the people should care about the education of the children, because it’s very important for the future of our country. 佳作四 题目：你校学生工作处展开了以“创建绿色班级”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据 Making Our Class Green Our classroom is our home. So we must make it clean and tidy. However, there are still a lot of problems in our classroom. Sometimes, the lights and running water are still on after school. Some students throw away waste paper, soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books as rubbish. And some students often throw away used plastic bags here and there in the classroom. All these can cause waste and pollution. From the above we can see some students have no sense of environment protection. So, it?s important to teach them to protect the environment. At the same time, we can collect used paper, soft drink bottles, exercise papers and books for recycling. Also, wemust learn to save power and water. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. Let’s start with small things and from ourselves. 佳作五 题目：以“Take Good Care of Animals”为题写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。 要点提示： 1、 列举动物的生存环境受到破坏，有些动物已绝迹的现象； 2、 动物被杀害或灭绝带来的严重后果； 3、 可行性建议。 Taking Good Care of Animals Most of the animals on the earth are peoples friends. They help us with many things and they are friendly to us. Often small animals such as monkeys, deer, snakes, and rabbits are killed by people for food. Some big ones are killed for money. Some have to move away for their homes have been destroyed. So animals become fewer and fewer, and even some of them die away. Killing animals can destroy balance of nature, and finally make people in danger. That?s terrible. So we should realize the importance of protecting the animals. To my mind, we should stop killing and eating animals or destroying their homes. People who kill animals should be punished badly. In this way we can protect animals well. Love animals and take good care of them for human itself. 佳作六 题目：根据以下要点提示，写一篇题为“Let Books Be Our Good Friends”的议论文，词数120数左右。 要点提示： 1、 书是我们的朋友；（从书与知识的关系、知识与人生的关系来说明） 2、 历史上的伟人都爱书；（从读书与伟人所以能取得事业成功的关系来阐述） 3、 结论：书能使我们了解过去、瞻望未来，是世上最宝贵的东西。 Let Books Be Our Good Friends Books are our friends because they are bridges to knowledge. Knowledge is valuable because it makes our life rich and changes our life. Almost all great men in the history of human beings loved books. We have every reason to believe it is the knowledge in books that led them to success. There is no genius without books. Because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. A man is half blind if he is unable to read. Books make us able to learn about the past and look forward to the future. They are the most valuable things in the world. Let books be our good friends all the time. 佳作七 题目：根据要求完成作文，词数60~80。 目前，国家倡导在中小学生中开展“阳光工程”活动，建议每天锻炼一小时，关注自身健康，保证睡眠时间，坚持吃早餐……请结合你的学习生活实际，谈一谈你对开展此项活动的看法，并把你的看法写给中学生报的编辑。 4 要点提示： 1、 所谈活动方式可以是你喜欢的或学校开展的，也可以参照所给图示。 2、 信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Sunshine Project Dear Editor, I’m a student from a middle school. Now in our country, we are all taking part in the “Sunshine Project” activity. I like this project very much, because I’m a sport lover. I like running, playing basketball and swimming after school. Now at school, we do different kinds of sports for an hour every day. I think this project is very important to us. First, it’s good for our study. By taking exercise, we’re energetic and we can concentrate more on study. Second, it can help us form good habits of eating and sleeping. In a word, this project can keep us healthy and strong. I hope every student can take an active part in it and enjoy it. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 题目：健康一直是人们关注的问题，请根据下面内容就保持健康的重要性及方法，谈谈你的看法。 保持健康的重要性：（你的看法） 保持健康的方法：1、多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物； 2、多锻炼，强身健体； 3、摒弃不良习惯。 保持健康的结论：（你的看法） 注意：1、可适当增加所给内容，不可逐条翻译；2、词数100左右。 Keeping Health Health is very important for us. Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything. While poor health means nothing. So, we must keep healthy. How to keep healthy then? First, it is very important for us to eat more fruit and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat. Second, we’d better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we should be happy every day. Finally, we have to give up those bad habits such as drinking and smoking. In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves. 第四章 说明文 佳作一 题目：一些外车旅游者将到某“英语角”参观。假定你是“英语角”的负责人之一，请用英语准备一篇文章，介绍你们的“英语角”。 要点提示：1、 ：一年前成立，许多中学生每个周末都来参加活动；成立以来已有成千上万的人参加过活动；许多大学生和外国朋友也经常参加。 2、 活动形式：练习英语会话，学唱英语歌曲，做各种英语游戏等。 3、 效果：弥补了英语课堂教学中的不足；成为学习英语不可缺少的活动；受到中学生、学生家长、教师的欢迎。 Our English Corner Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our English corner. This corner was set up a year ago. Every Sunday morning, students from different middle schools gather around here. Thousands of students have been here since it appeared. Many college students and foreign friends often join us, too. In this corner we practice English with each other. We talk in English about everything we’re interested in. Also, we learn to sing English songs, play all kinds of English games and so on. We have a good time here. We fell that we have leaned a lot that can’t be done in English classes. So our English Corner has become a must and more and more welcomed by middle school students and their parents and teachers. If you want to know more about our corner, you can talk to the students here. Thank you. 佳作二 题目：以“Beijing — Capital of China”为题，写一篇介绍首都北京的说明文，词数100~120。 范文 Beijing — Capital of China Beijing is the capital of China. Its a large modern city with a long history. There are many old buildings and beautiful parks in Beijing. A lot of trees and grass are around the beautiful city. Beijing is also a great place of interest. As we know, Beijing will host the Olympic Games in 2008. And the whole country is getting ready for it. Also, Beijing is both the center of our country’s politics and economy. Many international meetings are held in Beijing every year. Today the whole earth and society are paying much more attention to Beijing, China. Beijing is also a city of tourism. There are many modern hotels there. Millions of people from all over the world visit Beijing every year. All Chinese people are now working hard to make our capital more and more beautiful. 佳作三 题目：为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《21世纪英文报》正在举办以“How to be a Good Learner”为是的征文比赛，请你踊跃投稿。 How to be a Good Learner As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready or our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It’s good to study in groups and to help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, we’d better ask others for help. I hope all these will be helpful to us. 第五章 十篇必背范文 一、 慰问信 Dear Alan, I am extremely sorry to hear of your illness, which we had thought was clearing up, has become more serious, and that you have had to go into hospital. Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time and that you will soon be out and work with us happily again. Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery. Best wishes to you and your family. Yours sincerely, Mary 二、 道歉信 Dear Miss Miller, I’m very sorry for that I haven’t been to your birthday party. I had planned to your party that day, but something unexpected happened. There was something wrong with my business of my company. I had to go to Hong Kong to deal with it for myself. And I just came back home two hours ago. Say sorry to you once again. And I’m going to see you at your free time. At the same time, welcome to my home to be a guest. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 三、 感谢信 Dear Mr. Li, Thanks a lot for giving me all the help during my stay at your school. Without your great help, I cant make so much progress in my major. As you know, I was not good at English and I often failed at the beginning. I nearly lost my heart, but you often helped me with grammar and encouraged me. Now I’m studying in Beijing Language University. English is my major. I must say I’ll never be able to do it without your help. I’ll never forget your great help. Teachers’ day is coming. I appreciate it more than I can say. I’d like to send you a card with my best wishes to you and your family. May you be happy and healthy every day. 5 篇三：初中英语作文分为四等 初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13 15分；二等文：9 12分；三等文：5 8分；四等文：0 4分。今天教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。那么究竟是哪十个字呢？ “结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！” 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2 3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day! 要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。 逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all首先，in addition, what s more, moreover都是另外的意思，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。 亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。 只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！ 相关推荐： 2012中考签约必修课：中考签约参考依据与签约（直升）考试