中考作文复习指导94247.ppt

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。1、材料作文2、命题作文3、应用文中考书面表达常见题型中考书面表达常见体裁1、记叙文2、说明文3、应用文（书信、E mail、调查报告、日记等）常见的写作话题写人、写物、写事（健康、计划、环保、日常生活、购物、看病、网络、学习方法、旅游交友等）中考作文评分标准第一档12—15分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。第二档8—11分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。第三档4—7分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。第四档0—3分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。。书面表达六步法抄美连加列审书面表达。认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。根据中心内容确定写作的人称和时态,以及文章的体裁。写作第一步审travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，下图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审审travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravelAlotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebody连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：连词：连贯句子1表层次增加First,second,third,atlast,whatismore,also,besides,Ononehand....ontheotherhand2表转折：but,however,though,afterall,3表概括归纳：inaword,inmyopinion,accordingto…4因果：because,so,becauseof,thanksto,asaresultof…5例证：forexample,suchas，infact…6并列：and，notonly…butalsoboth…and…practise Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert .AlthoughinsteadLet’spractise.Welikedoingkindsofsports, swimming,runningandhiking. ,hestoodup.Thenhegotout. ,hewentback. ,hesmiled.suchasFirstNextFinallyHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Weshouldn’teatjunkfood.Weshouldkeepawayfromthejunkfood.IfyouuseEnglishoften,youwilllearnitbetter.ThemoreyouuseEnglish,thebetteryouwilllearnit.Skill：Expressindifferentways.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotravelduringtheholidays.Theythinkitisagoodideatorelaxthemselves.Andsomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.美把修改后的文章工整地抄写在答题卡上。写作第六步：抄AsurveyreportabouthowtospendholidaysHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotravelduringtheholidays.Theythinkitisagoodideatorelaxthemselves.Andsomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.上周三初三年级组的同学进行了一次体检，结果发现同学们的视力下降了。请你用英语向全班同学报告原因（如图所示），并提出倡议：爱护我们的眼睛。2—31—121—4眼睛疲劳看电视玩电脑眼睛近视躺着看书走路看书眼睛疼痛强光下看书弱光下看书列提纲Asurveyabouttheeyesightofthestudents总Beginning:theeyesightbecomespoorerandpoorer分Body:thereasonsofbecomingneareye sighteda.watchTVorplaycomputergamesforlong;b.lieinthebedorwalkwhilereadingbooks;c.readinstrongsunlightorpoorlight总Ending:It’simportantforustokeepagoodreadinghabittotakegoodcareofoureyesBoysandgirls,asweknow,ourlifeisbetterthanbefore.ThereareTVsets,computersandmanymodernmachines.However,ourmodernlifedoesharmtooureyes,too.Twothirdsofstudentsfeeltheireyestired,becausetheyoftenwatchTVorplaycomputergamesforalongtime.Andaquarterofstudentswalkandlieinthebedwhiletheyarereading.So,theybecomeshort sighted.Onetwelfthofstudentshavesoreeyes.Becausetheyreadinstronglightorinpoorlight.WhenIsawthenumbers,Iwasverysurprisedatit.So,Ihopeeveryoneshouldkeepagoodhabittoprotectoureyes.Wecandoit!Mostofuspaidlittleattentiontoprotectingoureyes,sowiththetimegoesby,theeyesightbecomespoorandpoorer.Twothirdsofstudents’eyesalwaysgettiredbecausetheywatchTVorplaycomputergamesforlong.Andaquarterofstudentsalwayslieinthebedorwalkingwhilereadingbooks,sotheyhavebecomeshort sighted.Theothersalwaysreadinstrongsunlightorpoorlightsotheyhavesoreeyesoften.It’simportantforustoformagoodreadinghabittotakegoodcareofoureyes.Solet’sdoeverythingwecantoimproveoureyes.PassageOnePassageThreeBoysandgirls,Todaywehaveaclassmeet.Thisclassmeetisdissincionaproblemwithoureyes.Twothirdsofstudentsfeeltheireyestired.BecausetheywatchTVorplaycomputer.Aquarterofstudentsbecomeshort sightedbecasustheylieinbedorwalkingwhilereadbook.onetwelthofstudentshavesoreeyes.becausetheyreadinstrongorporlight.Eyesisveryimportantforus.Everyoneknowsthatwearelivingamodernlife.Atthesametime,wearepaidlittleattentiontoprotectingourselves.Eyes,forexample.Fromtheexamineresult,wecanknowitclearly.TwothirdsofstudentsfeeltheireyestiredbecausetheywatchTVorplaycomputergamesforlong.Aquarterofstudentsbecameshort sightedbecauseoflyinginthebedorwalkingwhilereading.Somestudentsreadinstronglightorpoorlight.Thatiswhyonetwelfthhavesoreeyes.Fromtheresult,wemusttakegoodcareofoureyes.Ifnot,theeye sightwillbecomepoorerandpoorer.byZhouChuanqiThinkingbackonthepastthreeweeks,wehadoureyesexamined.Asaresult,manystudents’eyesarebad.AbouttwothirdsofstudentsfeeleyestiredbecausetheyoftenwatchTVorplaycomputergamesforalongtime.Aquarterofstudentsareshort sightedbecausetheyarewalkingorlyinginbedwhilereadingbooks.Andonetwelfthofstudentsarereadinginstrongorpoorlight.Thatmakestheireyessore.Asweknow,oureyesareveryusefulforus.Sopleaseprotectoureyes.byYangBin