英语作文 大意是要求归还高三体育课becausetimeisnervousingradethreeofhighschool

because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.时间紧 time is intense, nervous是人的精神紧张。other teacher== other teachers.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your body don not good, you cannot better study. We think this is correct,你认为这是对的？we think that this is not correctbecause when we very hard, because 后面要跟从句 ，你的句子里没有动词because we study very hardwe need a lots of train and keep better state.想说我们需要锻炼并保持身体状态吗？train是指训练 并不准确的说锻炼 better state并不能体现身体状态we need to keep our fitness by taking certain exercise.if your body don not good, you cannot better study. 没有don这个词想说身体不好的话不能用直接说body do not good。可以说 如果不健康的话 没法好好学习if we are not healthy, we cannot study better.Because body is very important ,at last,we strong demand headmaster return P.E lessons.body改成health更好 strong 是形容词 不能用来修饰动词 demand sb to do sthwe strongly demand the headmaster to return the P.E lessons这些是语言上的一些问题 还有一些是中式英语的问题一下是我的建议 你参考一下吧The competition is very intense in Grade three in high school. The P.E class is always occupied by other subjects. We dont think this is correct. Although we need to spend more time on studying, we also need to keep our fitness to support the hard works. Therefore, we strongly demand that the P.E classes should not be replaced any more。

英语作文 大意是要求归还高三体育课becausetimeisnervousingradethreeofhighschool otherteacheroftenoccupytheP.Elesson.Wethinkthisiscorrect becausewhenweveryhard weneedalotsoftrainandkeepbetterstate ifyour作业帮