大学英语作文1900字:我的室友
大学英语作文 1900 字:我的室友my roommate it was my first day at the university. carrying bags of luggage, i walked slowly into the dormitory building. i looked door after door for my name. at last i found it. in the room, there was already a girl making her bed. smiling shyly, she greeted me with "how do you do".then, she continued her work, paying no more attention to me."what a stuck up fellow", i thought. then i began to eamine the room. it was no different from any other room i had it had been thoroughly cleaned by my new roommate, no doubt. minutes later, i started to eamine her. she was thin, short and hair was in a completely disastrous mess like a bunch of dirty clothes and tired lookwere clearly signs of a long journey. well, her 2’shirt was too big for her and her trousers were a bit short, which made her look , she wore a pair of rubber scandals, which were indeed out of fashion. in a word, she did not look like a smart freshman at all. "a yokel", i concluded. the second time she spoke, her accent told me that she was from the south. "shall i help you to get your luggage from the ground floor?" i did not refuse since i really needed help. wow!she was quick in action. before i said "thanks", she had already walked out of the room and was soon far ahead of me. "a good guy," i said to myself, "i will make friends with her. "i hurried and caught up with her. 简评 本文作者通过细致的观察和生动的语言,使一个淳朴少女的形象跃然纸上。作者 叙述了上大学的第一天对室友的第一印象。 有外表的描写:黝黑瘦弱矮小、头发像一团 乱草堆、穿着不合身的衣裤和过时的凉鞋。 由此,作者得出的结论是她是个“乡巴佬”。 有语言的描写:"how do you do","shall l help you to get your luggage from theground floor?",虽然言语不多,但读 者能感受到这是一个热心善良的女孩。还有 行动的描写:整理完自己的床铺后,帮作者 搬行李,表现出她勤劳淳朴的一面。因此, 作者最终产生了要和她交朋友的想法。本文 字数不多,情节简单,但作者成功地塑造了 室友的形象: 身材矮小, 但有着高大的形象; 衣着过时,但有一颗美丽的心灵,与作者相 成了强烈的对比。作者对语言的运用自如, 有扎实的语言功底。文章读来没有晦涩生硬 之感。