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「雅思」G类雅思小作文写成怎么样才能有8分?

2020-11-15 16:15:01
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最近有小伙伴问小V有没有G类雅思的干货。小V这就给大家送上!今天是G类雅思的小作文——8分作文范文!

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★G类雅思小作文,其实坑有很多,没有想的那么简单!

相比雅思A类的小作文,雅思G类小作文相对简单和实用。因为A类小作文要求对各种图表信息进行解读,而G类的小作文就是写一封信。一般是用来解决生活,工作,日常交际中的实际问题。常见的有投诉信,道歉信,感谢信,邀请信,申请信,建议信,请求信和推荐信。但是以为这种信简简单单就能写出高分?那你就是太天真了!很多同学太轻视小作文的写作,所以最后就犯了很多错误。

大家一定要注意,这类小作文由于篇幅不长,要言简意赅,直接击中信息要点。

语言要清晰 逻辑要连贯 句子结构要有一定复杂度和多样性 避免口语化,表达语气要符合信的内容 要表明收信人与写信人之间的身份关系。

雅思G类小作文8分范文解析!

题目:请你给你认识的一位学生写推荐信,说明他为什么值得推荐。

Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to recommend to you Mr. Rob Ford for his outstanding personality and the super ability for learning.

解析:

收信人和写信人(你)之间的关系是“你陈述推荐理由给收信人”。所以在开头要表明自己推荐的内容,也就是红色的地方,用简单的两个短语点明你要推荐的两个要点。

I became acquainted with Mr. Ford a few years ago while I was teaching Canadian literature to a class of English majors in which he was a student. His excellent performances on several occasions such as group discussions and open debate really took me by great surprise. Never had I met a young student speaking English so fluently and accurately.

解析:

这个观点在接下来的两个句子中得到了进一步的发展和具体化 (oral fluency and inaccuracy; insight into literature)。这样就避免了说空话, 使得观点得到了充分的支持。这是写作中所提倡和推荐的做法。

His insight into literature as a whole as well as the perspectives he cut into the analysis of characters in the literature aroused my great curiosity about his first-class and unique capability of doing research work. Later on, upon his completionof the Bachelor degree, he moved on to pursue his study for a Master’s degree in the same field of study and I was very lucky to be his supervisor. In addition, Mr. Ford has always been an honest person. He is very friendly to people and is very easy-going. Many of his classmates have mentioned him on different occasions about how helpful he was to them and to which I simply cannot agree more.

解析:

文中划线地方就是体现这封信语句规范的地方。包括动词和名词的选择,语句间的过渡词等等。

大家请多读几遍,认真体会。

Now Mr. Ford is applying to your prestigious university for a chance to continue his Ph.D research. I hope you’ll give him a favorable consideration. And should you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at the following e-mail address: JamesWang@gmail.com.Truly yoursJames Wang

解析:

最后段落记得再强调一下写信的目的或者观点的总结。

最后附上符合该信件的结尾问候语。

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