助力高考!2014年英语高考作文解析!
【考点】R3:图画类;S4:应用文.
【分析】本文属于图表类作文,文章要写的重点内容反映在纯英文的图表中.写作要点:说明写信的目的;询问:开课的时间和每周上课时间、班级大小、收费情况、住宿类型.在写作时,描述图片应以第一人称和一般现在时态为主.重要短语:plan to do….(计划去做某事),attend a summer school (上暑假课),would like to do….(想要做某事….),know sth about sth(知道,了解….),pay for….(付钱买….),have to(不得不….),look forward to doing (期望做…).
【解答】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.(说明写信的目的)I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start(上课时间)and how many class hours are there per week?(班级大小) Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.【高分句型】I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course(收费情况)and whether accommodation is included(住宿类型).【高分句型】Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【点评】写作看图作文时,首先认真看图,结合图片和文字,确定所要表达的主题是什么,然后围绕主题,提炼要点,合理想象,对译出的要点通过合理的组合,加上必要的连接词使表达连贯.同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型