中考英语高分作文攻略
分析云南近6年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“经历与感受”这一话题共涉及过6次, 2017省卷“A Special Day”、 2019昆明“On my parent’s birthday”、 2018昆明“A small thing”、 2017昆明A“One day in my childhood”、 2015昆明A“The good old days”、 2014昆明A“A happy time”;全国近年中考真题也针对自己或者他人的经历和感受进行考查。2019昆明On my parent’s birthday 某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动,请你用英文以 “On my parent’s birthday”为题目写一篇记叙文投稿,内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个; 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。On my parent’s birthday ①August 8th was my mother’s birthday. My father and I wanted to give her surprising birthday presents.①文章采用“总—分—总”的结构展开叙述。 ②In the morning,my father and I went shopping and bought a very nice cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food. When we got home, my father cooked some nice food in the kitchen. I went to my room to make a birthday card. I wanted to tell my mother that I loved her very much. Then I wrote in the card, “I love you, my dear mother!” I put it on her pillow, then we cleaned the room. We felt very tired,but we were very happy. When my mother got home,we said, “Happy Birthday!” My mother smiled. We had supper together. My mother said, “Thank you,my daughter!” ③How happy we were!②灵活运用多种句型:时间状语从句和宾语从句等,讲述事情的经过。③结尾用感叹句表达一家人的幸福。二、英语作文写作思路及流程(五个步骤)1.审题(文体、时态、人称、题目内容) 文体:记叙文、说明文、议论文和应用文。 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时、 现在进行时、过去进行时、现在完成时、 人称:第一、第二、第三人称 题目内容:写人、叙事2. 标新立意 写作的方向、意图和动机。(广度和深度)3.搭脚手架 ①框架(总 分 总) ②提纲挈领 每段主旨 首段 点题 中间 描述事情经过(人物、事件、影响) 结尾 呼题、升华情感